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Poetry Feast winners have write stuff

2018-10-23 · People

A POEM inspired by snippets of conversations at Stanthorpe and another about how to write poetry have won this year’s Ipswich Poetry Feast International Writing Competition.

Wynnum man Damen O’Brien’s poem, The Cold Snap, was the overall winner, earning him the prestigious Babies of Walloon Statuette.

For the first time in the competition’s 16-year history, a Babies of Walloon Statuette was also awarded in the School Age category with Victoria’s Emerson Hurley taking out the honour for his piece titled How to Write Poetry .

Mr O’Brien, who previously won the competition in 2013, said he was shocked and honoured to win the statuette.

“My parents live in Stanthorpe and it was inspired by a number of little events and conversations and then I kind of mashed them together,” he said.

“It didn’t quite happen that way, let’s say it’s more fantasy than real.”

Ipswich Poetry Feast holds special significance for Mr O’Brien.

“To be honest the Ipswich Poetry Feast really started me off because it was after my first win in 2013 that I actually felt like maybe I could do this poetry gig,” he said.

“Since then I’ve had quite a number of successes, but Ipswich certainly started me off.

“What I enjoy most is when you write something down and look at it and go ‘wow, did that actually come out of my pen or pencil’.

“It’s quite rare that it happens and it can be a word, a line or a whole poem. It’s a euphoric feeling, like hitting a hole in one. Once you’ve had that feeling you want to try and experience it again.”

For Emerson Hurley, winning the competition’s inaugural statuette in the School Age category was rewarding.

“It was very exciting, I’ve been in the competition for a couple of years now and I’ve always been eying off the silverware, so to speak,” he said.

“It was very rewarding to hear my work read in such a professional and engaging way.”

Emerson said his entry was inspired by American poet Wendell Berry’s work Manifesto: The Mad Farmer Liberation Front and the idea of finding beauty in irrational things .

“I really like the message of that poem which is an irrationalistic one and wanted to explore the idea that if faced with suffocating rationalism the way to behave is irrational,” he said.

Emerson said he thought more poetry should focus on the irrational parts of human experience, without intellectualism.

He said he planned to keep writing and wanted to develop his own voice, with his ultimate goal to get his work published.

“At the moment my work is heavily inspired by the work of others and I think it’s good to imitate other people in your early years, and it can be a good way to become a good technician, but I would like to try to develop my own unique voice,” he said.

Launched in 2002, the Ipswich Poetry Feast was inspired by literary legend Henry Lawson’s connection to the region.

In 1891 he wrote The Babies of Walloon after the tragic drowning of sisters Bridge Kate and Mary Jane Broderick in a waterhole at Walloon.

A memorial to the sisters takes pride of place at Walloon’s Henry Lawson Bicentennial Park.

Poetry Feast winner Damen O’Brien.

The Cold Snap

This is Stanthorpe weather: the clouds

draw a fickle quilt over the horizon but

make no rain. We stand nearly in the fireplace,

which is devouring its ironbark like desperation.

One farm over, the guns boom on time,

and the Corella’s rise desultorily, circle

and return to the remains of the crop.

The scarcrow’s salute has stopped worrying

them and there’s nothing else to eat but frost.

This is Stanthorpe weather: so the

rain cuts into me while I carry out

the survivors from the coop’s massacre,

limp and bloody, shocked beyond reaching.

We plugged last night’s entry holes

but the predator has found them now

and will not stop, these hens are lost.

The blood specks the straw and the

guns shout on cue, shaking the chicken wire.

Out of the wind, the town’s women

cradle their lattes in the only cafe they will

drink in. The other’s owner has a

mad son, the boycotters tell me, a killer

of chickens when he he was young and when

that herd of sheep were found with the straight

edges of their throats staring at the sky,

gossip said that he’d have been the one with a

steaming knife stumbling away into the dark.

Everyone knows who the killers are.

A neighbour leans over his fence and tell us

of marsupials we’ve never heard of. Phascogales.

Google has a glamour shot of them, modelling

cuteness and teeth. When your birds are got at

it’s the Phascogales shimmying in, needlepoint smile.

But, he pauses for the sky to roil and brood above,

the frost will bring them to an urgent hunger.

Everyone’s heard of them in town but me.

I never witness what has taken the chickens.

Some nocturnal predator, an opportunist

for easy protein. The weather has turned.

The Fort-Knox coop stands half built, dripping.

I learn late that the pariah cafe was firebombed

one night and has closed its doors. The town keeps

its own sentences and justice. The guns keep firing

and the bird lift more slowly every time, but no one

expects more bodies until the weather shifts again.

Damen O'Brien

Overall winner School Age Emerson Hurley.

Ipswich Poetry Feast 2018 winners:

5 to 7 Years: The Ender Farmer , Leo McNally (Karalee, Queensland)

8 to 10 Years: Henry’s Poem , Amaeh Reed (Trinity Beach, Queensland)

11 to 13 Years: An Ethical Irony , Michael Swift (Como, Western Australia), The Mansion That Time Forgot , Grace Longhi (Holy Cross School, Trinity Park, Cairns, Queensland)

14 to 15 Years: Picturesque , Mysheka Field (Marsden, Queensland)

16 to 17 Years: How to Write Poetry , Emerson Hurley (Brighton East, Victoria)

Open Age Bush Poetry: Bluey , Tom Mcilveen (Port Macquarie, New South Wales)

Open Age Other Poetry: The Cold Snap , Damen O’Brien (Wynnum, Queensland)

Open Age Local Poets: Rough Country , David Gagen (Silkstone, Queensland)

Open Age Picture Ipswich Theme: Golden Reign , Kelly Millar (Clayfield, Queensland)

Ipswich Poetry Feast Encouragement Award 5 to 17 Years: Fishing Ever After , Sophia Brady, (Albany Creek, Queensland)

Ipswich Poetry Feast Encouragement Award Open Age: The Fossicker , Melissa Harrison (Herne Hill, Western Australia)

Ipswich Poetry Feast School Award: Holy Cross School (Trinity Park, Queensland)

Overall winner School Age and recipient of the Babies of Walloon statuette: How to Write Poetry, Emerson Hurley (Brighton East, Victoria)

Overall winner Open Age and recipient of the Babies of Walloon statuette: The Cold Snap, Damen O’Brien (Wynnum, Queensland)

The Babies of Walloon monument.

How to Write Poetry

Think before feeling.

Come to questions only

when you have their answers

securely in your grasp.

Touch pen to paper

always with trepidation.

Fear the critics. Accept

nothing but perfection.

And you will produce poetry

fit only to be studied.

No mark of you will

be left. As though your

poetry were an act

of suicide. Write

ecstatically. Seek our suffering

and find joy in it.

Descend into thirty-six hours’

sleepless purgatory

and awaken to dreams

dreamed in all

dimensions. Write letters

to your congressman

asking him how

his days go by. Write

letters to strangers

telling them what

must be done.

Unmake yourself.

This is the only way

to slip piece by

piece through the keyhole

of a meter. Breaking

your heart as often

as possible will help

with this. Have an

affair. Try it. Write

exclusively for children.

Literacy declines

with age. Love

your reader violently. Hate

your read with

ecumenical passion.

Love the fool

foolishing to love his

fate. Write it

all down. Ignore all

advice. Including this.

Emerson Hurley

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